The Piano

It was a breezy,windy day and I started playing my piano. I was thinking back om my memories. I felt heartbroken,lost,low and upset this was because I remembered my poor wife who I loved to bits. Each time I think about my wife tears came dripping down my face. Next I remembered when I was in the war and my best friend died. He died during the war and in the battlefield.I whispearead “Please don’t die, I can’t live without you” but sadly he died.

Also I remembered the day I gave my grandson a rocking horse. He loved it to bits. He went round his house shouting “gidiup gidiup”. He was acting as if he was a cowboy and he staded”thankyou grandad you are the best!”

Finally he came round the piano and he asked “can I play the piece you taught me with you? And I answered of corse you can.3,2,1 of you go. So we sat there playing the piano together happily

The end

From Aqsa

Why should we give money to charity?

In 5o we have been persuading Mr Grumpy to give money to charity because he thinks we should’nt.

Dear Mr Grumpy,

Comic relief helps people all around the world and is very important. It can save peoples lives. Do you realise how much it helps people?I kind of think your being inconsiderate so please can you be abit nicer.

As you may know it helps people who have cancer just like Megan who has lukaemia. Megan is also her mum’s rock because whenever her mum is busy she is there for Oscar her little brother. Or Eric from England who at the age of 16 was homeless. And then some people advised him to go to centrepoint.

You can give money, it will not go to popstars as you said,it will go to people who truly need it. Like for example Kajal in India only 1 in every 1000 have acsessto a toilet. That is why we need the money.

It is really important please try your best. It will be really grateful if you go on you can find out lots more. Also if you don’t offer then who will?

I think if you help it will make a difference so please do what you can we will really appreciate it.

From Aqsa



In literacy we have finished our unit.Our new unit is on dolphins.Last week we worked in pairs to create a mind map on dolphins what we already know.
I wonder if anyone can tell us anymore about dolphins?

My trip at the velodrome – by Aqsa

The velodrome was really amazing,at first i thought it would be scary but once we arrived it was not scary.
Whilst the cyclist were racing one of the cyclist fell of the bike and the other cyclist almost fell of her bike but luckily she did’nt.
What amazed me was the speed because the cyclists were going really fast.
I heard the ordience screaming,cheering and shouting for the cyclists.
The thing that inspired me was the way that the bike’s turned and it looked like they were going to fall but they did’nt.
I enjoyed my time at the velodrome and i hope to go again.