The Crystal, White Snow

The crystal,white snow

The snow falls like glistening gems,like the stars in the day,
This cold wintry atmosphere lights up those heartbroken spirits,
It’s so cold but so heartwarming,
Cold, beautiful,fluffy stuff which is like those memories that were washed away,
These wonderful memories coming too my head as slowly as snow,
Thinking about all those lovely things made me think about my long lost cousin.

10 thoughts on “The Crystal, White Snow

  1. I like it when you said ,the snow falls like glistening gems you could improve it by doing something apart from snow like the shining ice in the daylight

  2. Hi Nadia , I really like your blog post. I like it how you have writen it about snow because I love snow. I love how you have used describing to make your work super. I think that you could use some imbeded clauses to improve your work. Where did you get the idea to blog about this?
    From Charlie

  3. i think that is a lovely poem miss okell it had a calm rhythm to it i really think that was a grate poem

    from Lily m at

  4. I really like that because of all the detail and description
    I especially like the snow glistening like gems

    WELL DONE

  5. I really like that because of all the detail and description
    I especially like the snow glistening like gems!

    WELL DONE

  6. I really like that because of all the detail and description
    I especially like the snow glistening like gems!
    It’s amazing.

    WELL DONE

  7. Your post was strong worded and what inspierd you to write such a blog like this? Do you like reading as it sounds like a real peom book?well done!

  8. It is very good but you can put some more writing. And you could also put some more interesting sentences about snow. And very well done because it is very good.

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